Coming out

No, this isn’t a post about me coming out of the closet, I am not gay, but I am making something of a reveal about myself.

As those of you who have been paying attention will know, I write under the pen name of Alex R Carver, because I want to keep my writing and personal lives separate. Part of my efforts to keep the two aspects of my life independent of one another I have been using a picture of my mum’s Yorkshire Terrier as my author picture.

Molly is a cute dog, and an effective way of not revealing myself, but it seems as though that is not going to be possible moving forward. I was invited to write an article for a new project recently – details are top secret right now so that’s all I can say on the subject – and as part of that I was required to provide an author picture that was actually of me.

This was something of a challenge as I wanted to take part in this opportunity, but I didn’t want to be recognisable. Fortunately, there are many ways to play with an image, and using black and white as well as a touch of soft focus or some such thing (I don’t actually know what was done to the photo I took) I was able to have a picture of me where I don’t believe you could recognise me, at least not easily.

If you look below you’ll see the before and after.

An Interview with Kay MacLeod

Welcome to ARCBookblog Kay, it’s so nice to have you here, joining me for an interview, first of all, before we get to the questions, why don’t you tell me and my readers a little about yourself.

Bio pic.jpgKay – Confession time, I’m a fantasy addict! For as long as I can remember, I’ve loved the concept of magical worlds. I was the kid with dragons doodled around the edge of her school work, the one with her head constantly buried in a book. As a teen, I shunned partying to play Magic the Gathering and DM Dungeons and Dragons games.

Through the years, I’ve always made up stories and took characters on amazing adventures, in the privacy of my own mind. Now I want to share them with other people.

I live with my husband and cat in Nottinghamshire in England. When I’m not writing (or planning something I’m writing) I’m usually working, reading, playing bass for my church’s worship team, playing computer games (World of Warcraft, Dragon Age, Pokemon, Minecraft) or drinking tea.

Okay, now that we know you’re an Englander, just like me, let’s get to some questions.

Me – Is writing a full-time occupation, or do you have a job that keeps you from it?

Kay – I wish! I would absolutely love to be able to spend all day writing, and that is my ultimate goal. I’ve only released one book so far, and I know it will take time to get to the point where I can support myself with my writing. I can’t wait until I’m one of those irritating people that gets to do a job they enjoy.

Me – What aspect of publishing do you find the easiest?

Kay – Coming up with ideas. My mind is constantly churning with new characters, plot twists, worlds and settings. I’m on the second book of my first series, which I think will be four books long, and I already have plans for a prequel, about eight short stories, a different series of six books, a spin off from that series with the main character’s cousin and rough ideas for another four or five things I want to work on…

I even have big ideas for events or promotions (check out the Indie Advent Calendar I ran over Christmas I just love creating things, it’s only a problem because I never seem to have enough time to do everything I want to.

Me – What do you find the most difficult?

Kay – I think a lot of authors find promotion hard, I’m no exception, we tend to be introverts so talking about myself is always a challenge. I’ve found that I don’t mind discussing my characters or story though, it makes my day when someone talks to me about what they’ve read and start telling me their theories of what will happen later in the series. Then I find not giving away spoilers with my expressions really difficult!

Me – What is your perfect writing environment.

Kay – There has to be a cup of tea. Though that’s true for most things I do… I generally write from my office when I’m on my own, I prefer quiet and a good chunk of time so I can get into a flow. I especially like taking a week off work so I can just attach myself to the keyboard and let myself run away into the story, even with a full day to write I can sometimes still be there at 1am if I’m really feeling it.

Me – Do you have a process you follow when writing a book?

Kay – I plan well, and I really enjoy it. I use Evernote for keeping everything on track (including my life) I have character bios, maps, timelines, outlines and random ideas I may use at some point. I write out everything I want to happen during the whole book, shift it around if I need to, then bullet point each individual plot point. I like to leave my chapters with a hook into the next one so I decide where each chapter will end and have a loose idea of what will happen in it- even if it’s just a sentence or two.

I also have a list of things I want to develop in each character and ideas for dialogue or points that don’t need to happen at specific times so that I can fit them in wherever they feel right as I write. I never cling too tightly to anything I’ve plotted though, I end up revising my chapter placements a lot as I get into the story and have even changed huge chunks of original material when I’ve found something that will work better.

Me – Would you rather be critically successful or financially successful?

Kay – Financial success would be wasted on me, I’d still mooch around in a hoodie and jeans, still hate wearing jewellery and I wouldn’t be able to tell you the difference between an expensive car or a rubbish one! If I had enough to live comfortably on and spoil my husband now and again it would be enough for me. I remember a while ago before I was anywhere close to finishing Heirs of Power I heard something being described as ‘critically acclaimed’ and thinking, ‘one day my work’s going to be critically acclaimed.’

Me – If you could pick 1 celebrity to read your book and give an opinion on it, who would it be?

Kay – I don’t really…celebrity. I’m terrible at knowing who people are or what they are famous for. There are a few bands and actors I like but I’ve never been into celebrity culture. I think I’d have to say Peter Jackson then, if he likes it he can promise me that he won’t let the film adaptation be disappointing!

Me – Do you find it easy to avoid being distracted when you sit down to write?

Kay – I have good days and bad days. There have been days that I started in the morning, forgot to eat lunch and realised I’m supposed to be going out that evening and have an hour to get ready. Then there are the times when I just wonder what my word count is and then what that makes my average chapter length, or what my sales look like today, or I get side-tracked into researching new ways to say things or describe a colour.

The main thing that never fails to take my attention is my cat, he’s too adorable to ignore and he usually ends up laid across my left arm or shoulder while I work. It slows down my typing but I always feel better with him helping out.

Me – If you have published already, what has been the most successful technique/site/opportunity for you in terms of getting either exposure or sales?

Kay – Goodreads, for sure. It has such a wealth of opportunities and information for writers of all kinds. I’ve made some great friends on there, gotten reviews, done giveaways, promoted my events, even gotten interviews 😉

The groups on the site have been so helpful to me, there are some really amazing people on there, with much more knowledge and experience than me. Even a lot of the things I’ve done outside of Goodreads is because I learnt how to do them on there. I highly recommend it, for readers and bloggers too, come and say hi to me when you get on!

Me – Last but not least, and something a little fun, what is your favourite animal, and why?

Kay – I adore most animals, so I’m going to cheat and say my favourite domesticated animal is my tuxedo cat, Kai. He’s the cutest little thing ever, he’s four but I think he’ll be like a kitten forever, he’s so small with huge eyes and a bigger personality.

My favourite wild animal is a cheetah. They are perfection. Such beautiful and immaculately designed creatures, I love their sleek look, their incredible sprint and their fluffy babies.

If you’d like to know more about Kay, just follow the links below.


Amazon Author Page




Heirs of Power

51lDg+Kgm1L.jpgAfter stumbling upon an otherworldly ritual, Kitty Fairlow discovers that her own incredible hunting skills are not merely due to a lifetime of training. She has been gifted powers from an ancient spirit, passed down by her father. She is a Constellation.
And she’s not the only one.
A new generation of heroes have each inherited unique abilities in order to prevent the corruption of their world by the Tenebri, a race that thrives on life energy. Kitty, along with a high-born dancer and a snarky juggler, must find their allies before the Tenebri army picks them off.
With the powerful enemy emerging, can the Constellations gather in time to put an end to the threat for good, or will their foe succeed and wreak the same destruction they have unleashed on their own world?

If you like this you can buy the book at Amazon



Anti-social vs social media.

I was going to title this post Autism vs Social Media, but that seems unfair to the people who are anti or unsocial but don’t have autism or mental health problems as a reason (some people simply prefer to avoid people).

I have encountered a number of discussions on Goodreads recently about the need for and the usefulness of Facebook author pages and other social media, and every time I am left with the same set of conflicted feelings. On the one hand, I know that social media can be a very powerful tool in this globally connected age for enabling a writer to find readers, build a fanbase, connect with fans, etc; on the other, this only works if you are able to use social media effectively.

If, like me, you have difficulty dealing with people on any level (in my case the reason for that is I have autism and a number of other mental health problems, but people have many reasons for this problem) then social media can be a real struggle; unfortunately this means that no matter how good your book is, and I’m not about to claim a Dickens level of writing ability here, but I do believe I am above average as an author, it will be difficult to get people to discover the books you release.

There are sites that will provide authors with a quick boost of promotion, but long-term success will only come as a result of good quality, consistent use of social media. What the solution is, I don’t know, but if anyone out there can come up with a suggestion for how I can market my books effectively, and long-term, without spending a fortune, and without burning myself out trying and failing with social media, I’d love to hear from you.

An Interview With Louann Carroll

Joining me today on ARCBookblog is Louann Carroll, an interesting lady with several books to her name who has agreed to answer some questions so we can all get to know her a little better. First though, here is what Louann says about herself.

15871692_1520437217970531_1381870915353840774_n.jpgLouann Carroll is a Native Californian living in the Sierra Nevada foothills with her husband, Dennis.

Mother to three children, she is an avid rock, fossil, and gem hunter who enjoys sharing her finds with family and friends. She is a student of alternative religion, archaeology, anthropology, and paleontology.

After leaving her position as C.E.O. in the Bay Area, she has pursued her writing career with much success. Winner of the 2010 Crescent Moon Press award for best novel, she has gone on to write radio talk shows and articles on adoption.

She is the author of the Gemini series including Gemini Rising, The Light and the Flame (coming soon) A Shadow of Time, a paranormal romance, Shadowlands, a prequel, Journeys, The Adventure of Leaf, and numerous children’s stories.

You can reach Ms. Carroll at:



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And now it’s time for the questions, I hope you like what Louann has to say

Me – Is writing a full-time occupation, or do you have a job that keeps you from it?

Louann – Writing is always a full time occupation. I have a day job, but writing is always on my mind. Every spare moment I have I either work on a blog or an article or a manuscript. If I’m not working on my writing, I am filled with guilt because there is so much I have to say. Of course, that is not to say everyone wants to hear what I have to say. It is just that I am driven to say it regardless. I am sure I drive my family and friends nuts

Me – What aspect of publishing do you find the easiest?

Louann – Writing is the easiest. I love to write. Stuff flows from my fingertips. I also like the sound of the keyboard when I type. It is like music to me.

Me – What do you find the most difficult?

Louann – Marketing, editing, anything that resembles work. Writing is not work to me. It’s the stuff that goes with it.

Me – What is your perfect writing environment.

Louann – I can write with stuff happening in the background but I prefer quiet. I can get lost in my thoughts and I like it there.

Me – Do you have a process you follow when writing a book?

Louann – My life would be so much easier if I had a process. My muse lets me see into the next chapter but that’s it. I am also a social journalist for Blasting News. When I get upset and need to vent they let me do some commentary. My blog is like that too, but fiction? I have to wait and the wait kills me. I even had a temper tantrum and refused to write. It didn’t do me any good. I just felt guilty and had to wait for the muse to take me where it willed.

Me – Would you rather be critically successful or financially successful?

Louann – I really don’t care about being critically successful so I guess financially successful. My goal is to give people what I call mind candy, a place to get away from the real world for a little while. If I can do that I consider myself successful.

Me – If you could pick 1 celebrity to read your book and give an opinion on it, who would it be?

Louann – Anne Rice. She let me post A Shadow of Time on her website and I nearly died.

Me – Do you find it easy to avoid being distracted when you sit down to write?

Louann – I find it easy, my husband not so much. He thinks I am ignoring him.

Me – If you have published already, what has been the most successful technique/site/opportunity for you in terms of getting either exposure or sales?

Louann – Making connections with other writers, authors and readers-networking so-to-speak. Also, Twitter has been great. I also belong to Triberr which is a blog platform where we tweet our blogs for each other. Right now I have a reach of over 500,000 people by using Triberr. I really recommend it. Just go to and you can pick the groups that fit your genre, start blogging and you are off and running.

Me – Last but not least, and something a little fun, what is your favourite animal, and why?

Louann – My little Agatha. She’s a purebred Fox Terrier who was rescued from a puppy mill. She’d lived in a cage for 7 years and had little human contact except when breeding. It was like her eyes met mine and we both fell in love. Because she lived in a cage, when she gets happy she walks in circles the exact dimension of her kennel. Even though I’ve had her 2 years now, she still runs in circles when she’s happy. Omg she is so cute.

Innocent Blood

41U1rz9XE5L.jpgThey call him the Pope on Dope.

Danny Fisk has a secret no one outside his family would believe.

Danny sees things others can’t: like ghosts and the future. In his teens, he used drugs to escape his gifts, but with help from his family, Danny cleaned up his life. For fifteen years, he lived the American Dream. He had a loving wife, kids, a great job, and proud parents.

That ended when renewed pressure from his abilities drove him back to drug abuse. Now, Danny’s on a mission to save as many as he can from the streets that would destroy them all.

Pursued by corrupt cops, drug cartels and his own inner demons, Danny must find a way to survive his gifts. If not, he’ll continue a downward spiral that could cost him the lives of those he’s trying to save.

As well as his own.

If you like the sound of this, you can buy it on Amazon


An Interview With Carole P Roman

Today I am interviewing a fellow author, Carole P Roman, who writes childrens’ books and spends a lot of time being incredibly helpful to indie author in a variety of ways, whether it is cheerleading, offering advice or suggestions, or more direct, like giving us the opportunity to have our books in swag bags at awards shows – I have to admit, I loved knowing producers, directors and actors were potentially getting their hands on my book.

Welcome to ARCBookBlog, my little corner of the web, Carole, sit down and put your feet up, the tea will be ready in a few moments.

First off, tell me a bit about yourself:

cprNamed to Kirkus Reviews’ Best of 2012 for her first book, award winning author Carole P. Roman started writing as a dare from one of her sons. Using an imaginary game she played with her grandson as a base, Captain No Beard was born.”Captain No Beard- An Imaginary Tale of a Pirate’s Life” has not only been named to Kirkus Best of 2012, it received the Star of Exceptional Merit, and won the Pinnacle Award for 2012. “Pepper Parrot’s Problem with Patience” Book 2 in the series, received 5 Stars from The ForeWord Review The Clarion Review. Strangers on the High Seas has won second place in the Rebecca’s Reads Choice Awards 2013. It has followed with six more books to the series. This year, Captain No Beard and the Aurora Borealis was named to Kirkus Best 2015. The entire cultural non-fiction series If You Were Me and Lived in… was named Best Series by Shelf Unbound.

And now a few questions

Me – How long have you been writing?

Carole – I have been writing since 2012 when my kids dared me to write a book.

Me – Is writing something you’ve always wanted to do?

Carole – I always dreamed of being a writer, but I thought I’d be more of an adult fiction. It never occurred to me to write for children. I love it.

Me – How would you describe yourself as a writer, a plotter or a pantser?

Carole – All three. Writing is fluid- it changes as our lives change. Sometimes the characters slap us on the head and say-“I’m not doing that!”

Me – Do you write every day?

Carole – I do some form of writing every day. I write articles for magazines and blogs. I write reviews. I even write letters to friends. I am always reading and always writing.

Me – What is your favourite genre?

Carole – I am a regency fan. Love the social codes and mores of Regency England. I do love to read history- so I read a lot of non-fiction.

Me -Is your favourite genre one you write in?

Carole – I love genre jumping in my reading, so I enjoy the same in my writing.

Me – If you could have written any book in history, what is it?

Carole – Shogun is my all time favorite book. It has the adventure, intrigue, romance and every time I read it, I learn something new about the characters and myself.

Me – What would you like to achieve with your writing?

Carole – I would like my non-fiction books to bridge the gap on confusion and misunderstandings between cultures and customs. I’d like Captain No Beard and my nursery series help children cope and adjust in certain situations. I’d like parents to write and say, I enjoyed reading your book the 400 times they requested it and I didn’t get bored. I’d love for a student to write and tell me, they finally understand about the flow and development of history from my historical series and they actually enjoyed learning about it. 

Me – Which of your books is your favourite?

Carole – Awww. That would be like picking children. Each book is both a piece of my heart and soul. Each was a part of my own life at the time and people who know me will be able to tell from the dedications.

Me – Tell me about your next release.

Carole – I have so much going on- If You Were Me and Lived on …Mars is taking students into space. Rocket-Bye, Can a Princess be a Firefighter and One to Ten are being released in hardcover. They are beautiful. If You Were Me and Lived in… the Ancient Mali Empire is being released. On the way to the end of production are If You Were Me and Lived in… Germany, Cuba, and the Ancient Mayan Empire. Well, that takes care of January. February is a whole different story!!

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If You Were Me and Lived on…Mars

if-you-were-me-and-lived-on-marsJoin Carole P. Roman when she blasts off to colonize the planet Mars, in the newest book of her informative series. Learn about how life would be living on the Red Planet. Travel to Olympus Mons, the largest volcano in the solar system. Look into the sky and watch Phobos and Deimos, Mars’ two moons. Discover what you would wear, and how the seasons change. See Mars through the eyes of an adventurous youngster like you and understand what life is like in a trip of a lifetime. Don’t forget to look at the other books in the series so that you can be an armchair traveler.

Book Release Date: January 9, 2017






An interview with the princess of paperback

Today I am interviewing a fellow blogger, Joyce from Princess of Paperback, who reviews and provides some of that all important support to indie authors like myself.

Welcome to ARCBookBlog, my little corner of the web, Joyce, sit down and put your feet up, the tea will be ready in a few moments.

First off, tell me a bit about yourself:

Joyce – Hi!  My name is Joyce and I’m a thirty-something bibliophile who grew up reading Robert Munsch. The Paper Bag Princess was my all-time favourite story.  Coffee and fiction are my addiction.  I love reading mystery/thrillers, crime, fantasies like Harry Potter, fairytales, a little bit of horror/paranormal, historical fiction and YA.

When I’m not busy at my day job, I’m a wife and mommy to 4 kids.  Some people eat to live, but I live to eat!  I’m a foodie who appreciates good food and doesn’t mind sharing recipes.  So here I am.  New to the world of blogging.

I’m also a bit of a couch potato.  From time to time, I’ll quote or write about the shows and movies I like to watch.

Now we’ve been introduced, I just have a few questions for you so my readers can get to know you better.

Me – How long have you been blogging?
Joyce – I’ve been blogging for 3 or 4 months now.

Me – Is blogging something you’ve always been interested in doing?
Joyce – I didn’t discover the world of blogging till just this year. So I’m kinda late on the blogging bandwagon. I never really thought I was particularly good at writing. So it wasn’t something I gave much thought to until now.

Me – Do you write every day?
Joyce – No. I post once every week or two, or when I have time really. Life is busy with 4 kids.

Me – What is your favourite genre?
Joyce – Mystery/thrillers

Me – What would you like to achieve with your blogging?
Joyce – I would love to be a book reviewer for a publishing company..wishful thinking right?

Me – What’s your favourite book?
Joyce – My favourite That’s a tough one. There are so many good books. But the only one I have ever read more than once, was Memoirs of a Geisha by Arthur Golden. Ooh. And of course, the beloved Harry Potter series.

Me – Tell me about your next post
Joyce – My next post will be a review of The Nest by Cynthia D’Aprix Sweeney.

Okay, now that we know you, a little better than we did before, how can we follow you?


Obsessed – my current WIP

Would anyone like a short story to read? I hope the answer’s yes, because I’ve got one for you. I’m working on it now, this is the 1st draft, with the intention of releasing it in time for the new year, though I haven’t yet made up my mind whether I am going to put it in Select and use the 5 free days it provides to promote it or put it out to as many places as possible and make it perma-free in the hopes that a constant freebie will drive interest in my novels.

Anyway, this is a story of approx 8,000 words. It doesn’t yet have a blurb (it lacks a cover as well, one step at a time, though) but it involves an attack on a young woman returning home from a party, and the events that ensue. I hope those of you who read it will like it.

Before I begin, let me say, I’m open to hints, tips and suggestions, both for improving it and for how I should release it , in terms of perma-free or otherwise.

Okay, without further ado here it is

OBSESSED (working title, suggestions also appreciated)

“Are you sure you don’t want Nick to give you a lift home?”

“You must be kidding, the house is only a couple of streets away,” Kirsty told her friend, unnecessarily since they were housemates. “Even if I did want a lift off someone, I sure as hell wouldn’t take one off Nick. Anytime he does me a favour, he thinks he deserves a reward, and he only ever has one reward in mind.”

“You should be glad he’s interested; Nick’s picky about who he sleeps with, and it’s not like it hasn’t been a while for you,” Paula said with a knowing look. “Just because you don’t want to date right now doesn’t mean you can’t have fun, and you’d have a lot of fun with Nick, trust me. Besides, I sort of hinted that if he made sure you got home alright, you’d make it worth his time.”

“If Nick’s such a stud, why don’t you shag him,” Kirsty suggested.

“I have done, that’s how I know he’s a stud,” Paula told her friend. “I can’t shag him tonight, though, I’ve already lined someone else up, and I doubt he’d be happy if I tried to bring someone else the bed. Not another bloke anyway, he probably wouldn’t mind if it was another woman.”

“No chance, Paula,” Kirsty said, recognising the look on her friend’s face. “I’m going home, alone. I’ll see you tomorrow, assuming you make it home by then.”

“I’m sure I will; one way or another. Don’t forget to wash to my dress before you return it.” Paula called out as Kirsty walked down the path to the gate.


The walk home only took a quarter of an hour, even at a slow pace; nonetheless, Kirsty was glad of the fresh air. It helped to clear her head, which was a little fuzzy from the alcohol she had drunk.

Out of habit her eyes darted all around her as she walked down the street. She didn’t really expect to be attacked, but it was late at night and she was sensible enough to be cautious. The street was empty but for herself and one other person. The figure, which she could just make out was male, was on the same side of the road as her and walking towards her, that made her more nervous than if there had been a crowd of drunken yobs. It was too late by then, but she wished she had taken the lift, even if it would have meant fending off Nick.

Kirsty felt a little better when the dark figure turned down the path to the house next to hers and disappeared from sight. She realised it must have been her neighbour, whom she had never seen, despite living at the house for four months; her housemate, Holly, had told her he was an old pervert who kept to himself and liked looking at the young women who walked past. That news hadn’t made her feel very good about moving in, even if the old pervert hadn’t been seen outside by any of her friends.

By the time the figure disappeared, Kirsty was only a short distance from home. Sliding her purse from her shoulder, she rummaged in it for her keys as she covered the remaining few metres and swung the gate open.

Kirsty didn’t see the figure standing in the shadow of the bush that separated the front garden from the pavement. She had no idea he was there until she was grabbed from behind. After freezing momentarily in fright, she came to her senses and struggled to free herself; she was weaker than the person who had hold of her, that was readily obvious, but didn’t allow her lack of strength to stop her. She tugged and wrenched at the arm around her in a futile effort to pull it away, and writhed and twisted against the grip that held her against the stomach of her assailant; nothing worked until she managed to hook a hook around the heel of her attacker.

Throwing her weight backwards, she sent them both tumbling to the ground. She landed heavily on top of her assailant and heard the air explode from his lungs, at the same time she felt his grip loosen; she immediately took advantage of the opportunity afford her and pulled free so she could scramble away and to her feet.

She had lost her handbag when she was grabbed, having dropped it out of fright, but still had a firm grip on her keys. Without looking she flipped through them, searching blindly for the right one as she darted for the front door.

“HELP!” she called out loudly as she was tackled before she could go even half a dozen paces.

Hitting the ground heavily, she kicked her heel backwards, eliciting a satisfying grunt of pain when she hit her attacker.

“HELP!” she screamed a second time. Twisting about, she lashed out again with her feet. This time the blow hit her attacker in the stomach, doubling him up. She scrambled to her feet when He let go.

Kirsty was fumbling to get the key in the lock when she was grabbed and slammed into the door. She barely had a chance to realise what had been done to her when she was slammed into the door a second time, leaving her dizzy and disorientated, with blood running down her face. When she was let go she fell to the ground, where she hit her head on the concrete of the path.

The last thing she heard before blackness overcame her, and she succumbed to unconsciousness, was a man’s voice, though she couldn’t make out whose voice it was, or what he said.



A bright, white light stabbed into her eyes as Kirsty struggled back to consciousness, making her blink repeatedly. The light didn’t diminish, despite the blinking, and she twisted her head, first one way and then the other, to try and avoid it, which she quickly discovered was impossible so long as her eyes were open.

Even when her eyes became accustomed to the light, and the pain diminished, Kirsty found she couldn’t see much. Indistinct outlines were all that were visible to her, including the indistinct shape of at least one person a few feet from her.

Her vision wasn’t the only one of her senses that was affected; she could also hear a ringing sound in her ears. Above the ringing she could dimly hear noises that suggested she was in a vehicle of some sort, and then a voice. “She’s coming round.” It was female and familiar, but her diminished hearing prevented her identifying it.

“Stay down, Miss.” A second voice, this time male, and completely unfamiliar, said when she tried to sit up. A gentle pressure on her shoulder forced her to remain lying down. “You’ve had a bad know on the head, you might have a concussion.”

“Where am I? How did I get here?” Kirsty wanted to know as she continued to try and make sense of the imperfect images she was seeing.

“It’s alright, Kirsty, it’s Laura, You’re in an ambulance, you were attacked.”

“I remember, someone grabbed me from behind.” Kirsty groaned then “My head hurts.”

“I’m not surprised, Miss, you have a couple of very large bumps on your head, both front and back. Does it hurt anywhere other than your head?” the paramedic asked.

“My throat is sore,” Kirsty answered, reached a hand up to touch it. She was stopped by her friend, who caught her hand. “And my face hurts.”

“Well your face is quite badly bruised, as is your throat. I think it would be best if you don’t anything more for the time being, just lay still until we get to the hospital. They’ll want to x-ray you when we get there, and after that the police will want to talk to you.”

“I think I’m going to be…” Before she could finish what she was about to say, Kirsty twisted her head sharply to one side and threw up.

“Thanks, Hon,” Laura said disgustedly. “That was all over my feet.”

“Sorry.” Kirsty’s voice was wear as her stomach heaved. After a few moments, the urge to be sick subsided and she rolled back so she was staring up at the top of the ambulance.

“This has not been a good night for me.” Although she couldn’t see her friend clearly, Kirsty could tell from her voice that Laura wasn’t happy. “First I had to miss out on the party because I was working late, then you wake me up just when I was getting to the good part of my dream about Liam Hemsworth, and now you go and throw up all over my feet. Can this night get any worse?”

“I hope not. I’m sorry, Laura; next time I’m attacked I’ll ask the guy to hold on while we wait for your dream to finish.”

“There’s no need for that, Kirsty, I’m just grumpy. You know I hate having my sleep disturbed. Why don’t you just lay back and think about all those hunky doctors who are going to be queuing up to look after you once we get to the hospital.”



“Hello Miss Newsome.” The stranger was obviously a police officer, there could be no doubt about that since he was wearing a uniform, as was the man with him. “I’m Sergeant Leroy, and this is my partner, Constable Habib. The doctor tells me you’re up to answering a few questions, do you mind if we ask you about the attack?”

“There isn’t much I can tell you,” Kirsty replied honestly. “I was walking up the path to my front door, and was searching in my purse for my keys when someone grabbed me from behind. I didn’t see who grabbed me, but whoever it was fell over as I struggled with him, and I landed on top of him. He lost his grip on me then and I scrambled away, calling for help. He tackled me before I got very far and I hit my face on the ground. I kicked out at him and he let me go again. When I got to my feet I ran for the door.

“I remember getting to the door, and I remember my hands shaking as I tried to get the key in the lock. Before I could he had me again. He hit my head against the door, twice. “She sounded more shocked by that than by the fact that she had been attacked. “After that I don’t remember much. I think I heard someone calling out but I might have imagined it.”

“You didn’t imagine it.” Laura assured her friend. “Someone did call out.”

“You seem to know something about this, Miss.” Sergeant Leroy turned to Laura, who was yawning repeatedly in the chair she had positioned near the head of Kirsty’s bed. “Would you mind telling us what you know?” he queried.

“I think I need a coffee first, I’m not awake enough to concentrate. I’ll be back in a moment.” Laura got to her feet and tiredly wandered off in search of a vending machine. It didn’t take her long to find one and then she was back, sipping from a gently steaming polystyrene cup. “Okay, now I feel a little more awake, what is it you want to know?”

“Whatever you’re able to tell us about the attack on your friend.” Constable Habib replied.

“Not much,” Laura admitted. “I got woken up when I heard Kirsty call for help. My room is at the back of the house and I’m a heavy sleeper so I don’t know how long she was calling for before it penetrated.

“When I finally did hear Kirsty I crawled out of bed and went to the front of the house to find out what was going on. Looking out of Julia’s window, she’s our other housemate, I saw someone in the front garden. I couldn’t really see much but I could tell it wasn’t Kirsty.

“Since I couldn’t see any sign of Kirsty, when I was positive I’d heard her, and I didn’t like what I could see of the figure outside, I ran back to my bedroom to grab my phone. I was just calling you guys on my way down the stairs when I heard someone calling out. A guy, it was definitely a guy’s voice, but I’m not positive what he said but it sounded something like ‘get the fuck off her’. When I got downstairs and out the front door, Kirsty was on the ground and there was two guys fighting a few feet away.

“One of them looked over when I opened the front door but I couldn’t see his face, it was too dark. The other guy hit him while he wasn’t looking. The one who got hit stumbled back, then turned and ran out of the garden; the second guy ran after him and that was the last I saw of them. If I’m honest, I didn’t even think about them after that, I was too worried about Kirsty and went to check on her. She was still breathing but I was worried about the blood on her face.

“It wasn’t long after that when you guys arrived, and so did the ambulance. And now we’re here. I don’t suppose any of that is very helpful to you, is it.”

“That’s hard to say, Miss. We’ll file a report and pass everything on. I imagine a detective will visit you tomorrow, or I should say later today, to take a more detailed statement,” Leroy told her. “Don’t worry, Miss, we’ll catch the person who attacked you,” he assured Kirsty.



Looking around furtively, the darkly-dressed figure left the street. His eyes darted everywhere as he walked up the path to a house that was virtually identical to the more that two dozen others on either side of the street. Instead of ringing the bell when he reached the front door he turned away and followed the path around to the side gate.

He was not a tall man, and had to stand on tiptoe to reach over the gate and lift the catch. The hinges creaked as he swung the gate open and he cringed at the noise, though he didn’t stop, nor did he turn back.

Walking quickly down the path at the side of the house he made his way to the back, where he did stop when he reached the kitchen door. Despite his concern for the noise made by the creaking hinges on the gate, he didn’t react at all as he took out a large kitchen knife from his jacket pocket and smashed it through the window in the door. Knocking out the remainder of the glass with the point of the knife blade He reached through and gropped around for a moment until he found the catch, he then swung the door open so he could walk into the kitchen.

Even with the moon out there was little light for him to see by, and after just three paces he bumped into the table. Since his eyesight wasn’t the best, even in daylight, he groped his way around the table, knocking over one of the chairs in the process. The chair fell to the floor with a loud clatter he was sure would have disturbed everyone in the house, and as he walked along the passage he heard hurried footsteps as someone came to investigate. Tightening his grip on the knife, he stopped before he could be seen by whoever was approaching.

With the knife at the ready He waited, and waited.

It seemed like he was waiting forever, though it was really no more than thirty seconds, before the footsteps reached the bottom of the stairs. When they did, He moved. His victim was caught by surprise and had no time to react, or make any move to defend himself, as he was pushed against the wall.

He saw his victim’s eyes widen in pain as he stabbed him in the stomach, but the hand he had over his mouth kept his scream from being audible. Pulling the knife out, He stabbed again and again. By the time he stopped, he had stabbed the man more than half a dozen times and there was blood on the wall, and the carpet, and all over his clothes.

Breathing heavily, He stepped away from his victim and let him fall to the floor, where he continued to bleed. He made no attempt to check that his victim was dead, he didn’t care, he just stepped away and started up the stairs to the bedrooms. As He ascended, his pace unhurried, he held the knife at his side, the blood that coated its blade dripping to the carpet to form a trail that revealed where he had been and where he was going.

He had been to the house before so he knew where to go, and when he reached the top of the stairs he turned to his left. In just a few steps he reached the main bedroom; the door was ajar and he pushed it wide, before stepping through and into the bedroom. The young woman He was after was cowering naked on the bed, her mobile phone in one hand and the quilt clutched in the other to cover herself as she stared fearfully at the doorway. She gave a little scream when he came through the door.

“What are you doing here?” Julia demanded when the figure moved further into the room and his face became visible in the light from the lamp. He was someone she had not expected to see, ever again, let alone in a bedroom. “Where’s Gary?” He moved slowly closer and she saw the bloodstained knife in his hand. “What have you done?” she asked, a note of panic in her voice.

He didn’t say anything as he stalked across the room, enjoying the fear that was written on her face. Instead he raised the bloody knife and darted to his left as Julia tried to scramble off the bed in that direction. He darted to his right as she reversed direction so he could again cut her off.

While Julia, the bedclothes abandoned and her nakedness forgotten, looked all around for a way to escape, He took the initiative. Jumping onto the bed, He ignored her screams as he stabbed the knife down viciously; the blade caught in the arm she raised instinctively to protect herself and he had to wrench it free so he could attack her again. The knife penetrated Julia’s chest that time, but he didn’t stop there.

In a frenzy that contrasted with the expressionless mask on his face, He stabbed her again and again, paying no heed to the blood that spurted and then fell to soak through the quilt to the mattress. He didn’t stop his attack until his arm began to ache and it was almost too much of an effort for him to lift the knife.

Looking down at the body at his feet, He saw that he had stabbed Julia so many times it was almost impossible to count the number of individual wounds. He felt no remorse over what he had done as he stared down at what had, only a short time before, been an attractive young woman. As far as he was concerned she had deserved it.



“Are you sure the police haven’t found out anything about my attack and Julia’s murder?” Kirsty asked, looking around nervously as she walked up the path to the front door.

“I’ve already told you everything the police told me,” Laura said. Unlike her friend, who was looking all around her as if she expected to be attacked again at any moment, she just walked straight up to the front door. She didn’t spare the shadowed front garden even a single glance. “Don’t worry; whoever attacked you isn’t going to come back. It was probably just a random thing; he grabbed the first girl that came along. You were just unlucky enough to be the first girl.”

“He didn’t attack me at random,” Kirsty said insistently. “Even the police agree with me. He was waiting behind the hedge; he was waiting for someone who lives at this house. That could only be you, me, or Julia. He might be back to attack me again.”

“If you are right and he was after someone from this house, then doesn’t it seem likely he was after Jules, especially now she’s been murdered,” Laura remarked. She didn’t mean to sound heartless, though she realised from the look on her friend’s face that that was how she came across, she was just trying to be as practical as she could. “If that is the case, I don’t think you need to worry about anything, he won’t be back.”

“Can’t you at least try and sound like you’re sorry Jules is dead?” Kirsty wanted to know. She had been horrified when told her best friend, and Gary, had been murdered barely twenty-four hours after she had been attacked. “She was my best friend.”

“I know she was your best friend, she was mine as well. Of course I’m sorry she’s dead, I’d never have wanted her to die, especially the way she did.” Unlike Kirsty, Laura had heard the news on the radio, which had included a report on the murders. The report had given more information than had been provided by the police when they questioned her about the murders of Julia and Ben, so she knew how brutal the murders had been, while Kirsty remained ignorant of just how her friends had died.

Both friends had been shocked when they heard about the murders, but they had different methods of dealing with the bad things that happened in their lives. “We have to get on with our lives, though, and we can’t go jumping at shadows,” Laura remarked as Kirsty continued to nervously search the small garden for anyone who might be hiding there. “The police will find the person who attacked you and murdered Jules.”

“What if he comes back for me?”

“You’re worrying about nothing, Kirsty,” Laura assured her. “Why would he come back for you?” He was after Jules. No-one would ever want to hurt you? You’re the nicest person I know.”

“But you think someone would want to hurt Jules?” Kirsty fiddled with her keys till she found the right one and unlocked the door.

“Obviously someone wanted to hurt Jules, they killed her.” Laura stepped past her friend and moved into the house. Despite her unworried attitude, she felt a small shiver run up her spine as she entered the dark house, though it was quickly dispelled when she turned the lights on in the passage and the living room.  “You know I loved Jules as much as you, but let’s face it, she never treated guys very well. How often have we heard guys swearing at her and threatening her?”

“I’ve had guys swear at me, and threaten me, in the past too, that doesn’t mean they’re really going to do anything. Besides, it doesn’t matter how Jules treated guys. That’s no excuse for someone to murder her.”

“I know that. We may never know why she was killed, but it isn’t going to help us to dwell on it. It’s depressing enough without thinking about it anymore than we have to. Do you want some wine?” Laura asked as she made for the kitchen. “I need something to help me relax, how about you?”

“Maybe one glass. I need to get changed before I do anything else though,” Kirsty called back as she headed up the stairs to her room. She was still wearing the dress she had been attacked in since Laura had been working all day, and hadn’t been able to pick her up from the hospital until late evening. She had been declared fit to leave at lunch time, but had refused to go home alone; fortunately, the doctor had understood her concerns and allowed her to remain at the hospital until she could be picked up. “I’ll be down in a minute.”

Kirsty was standing in the bathroom, examining the bruises on her throat in the mirror above the sink, when she heard the doorbell ring. She immediately looked around fearfully, though there was no-one for her to see. “Who is it?” she called out to Laura.

“How would I know? I haven’t made it to the door yet,” Laura yelled up to her friend. “Stop worrying, do you really think someone who wants to attack you is going to ring the doorbell?” As she walked down the passage towards the front door she sipped from the glass in her hand. Though she hadn’t wanted to admit it, her nerves were a little frayed, with the result that her first drink had been finished almost as quickly as she had poured it out. Her second drink was almost finished as well, and she had every intention of pouring herself a third when the glass was empty again.

There was no reply from upstairs but Laura didn’t really expect one.

While she opened the front door with her free hand, she raised the glass to her lips with the other. She was going to be pissed in no time at all, given the speed she was drinking at, but she didn’t care. “What the hell are you doing here, Patrick?” she wanted to know when she saw who was at the door.

Patrick didn’t answer, instead he brought his hand out from behind his leg, revealing the knife he was holding. Without saying a word he thrust the knife into the stomach of his ex-girlfriend’s best friend, who barely had a chance to realise he was holding a weapon before she was stabbed.

When Laura folded over the knife in his hand he grabbed her by the shoulder and shoved her backwards off the blade. His face showed no more emotion as he kicked her feet out of the way and stepped into the house, slamming the door shut behind him, than it had the previous night when he murdered his ex-girlfriend and her lover.

“Who’s at the door?” Kirsty called the question as she walked down the passage from her bedroom. She came to an abrupt stop when she reached the head of the stairs and saw her friend on the floor, Patrick standing over her.

She came to her senses and screamed when Patrick started up the stairs and she saw the bloody knife he was holding. Running back down the passage to her bedroom, she grabbed the door handle to slow herself and almost ended up falling over. She just managed to keep her balance, though she did trap her hand between the handle and the door; swallowing a yelp of pain she untangled herself and slammed the door behind her before turning the key in the lock.

Even with the door shut, she could hear Patrick making his way up the stairs. The noise sent her to the bed, where she had dropped her phone when she got changed. She tried not to listen to the sound of approaching feet as she frantically dialled the emergency operator, but she couldn’t block them out.

“Please, I need the police,” she told the operator in a terrified voice when her call was answered. “There’s someone in my house, and I think he killed my friend.” She almost dropped her phone when a heavy crash made the door shudder alarmingly. She knew the house was old and well-built, and the door was solid, nonetheless she doubted the door would hold forever.

Fearfully, Kirsty watched the door shudder twice more as she gave her address to the police officer she was put through to. Finally, she tore her eyes from the door so she could look around for something she could use as a weapon; there weren’t many possibilities, but she did see her tennis racquet leaning against the wardrobe, that, and the balls on the floor next to it, were the best she could come up with.

Dropping the phone, she clambered off the bed and darted over to the tennis equipment. She was just grabbing it when the door burst inwards. The noise of the door exploding open and slamming against the wall made her jump in fright and drop the racquet. Keeping her eyes on the doorway, and the figure that appeared in it, she bent and blindly fumbled for her makeshift weapon. She found a tennis ball before she found the racquet, and of their own volition her fingers closed around it.

Patrick’s momentum carried him halfway across the room after the door burst open. Stopping himself before he collided with the bed, he spun around and searched the room for Kirsty. He spotted her as the first o the tennis balls flew from her hand to strike him with deadly accuracy in the stomach, causing him to double up with a grunt of pain.

The second ball that Kirsty threw his Patrick in the side of the head, dazing him. He recovered in time to dodge out of the way of the third ball, and it sailed past him to smash through the bedroom window and disappear into the evening’s darkness.

A second or so after the ball vanished Kirsty thought she heard the sound of more glass breaking. Without being conscious of what she was doing, she dismissed the noise as her imagination for there was nothing close enough to be broken; the ball should have landed in either the garden of the house she shared with Laura and Julia, or the garden of the house next door.

Seeing that Patrick had ducked out of the way in case she had more balls to throw, Kirsty abandoned her fumbling search for more weapons and raced for the door. Once she reached the passage she sprinted along it to the stairs, moving as fast as she could. She wasn’t fast enough.

She was about to descend the stairs, in one giant leap if necessary, when she felt a sharp pain in her lower back. Instinctively she arched her back away from the pain and the weapon, and in doing so she lost her balance; unsuccessfully, she grabbed at the banister to try and keep herself from tumbling down the stairs.

Kirsty heard a sharp crack and felt an explosion of pain in her arm when she landed at the bottom of the stairs. She was sure she had broken her arm, but had little time to think about the injury as both the pain from her arm and that from her back were smothered by the darkness that crept into the edge of her vision. It was a repeat of the other night that she would have quite happily lived without.

As her vision faded, and everything slowly disappeared into the fog that was engulfing her mind, she dimly heard footsteps on the stairs above her. Patrick was coming to finish what he had started, and there was nothing she could do to stop him.

Before unconsciousness overtook her completely she heard a crashing sound, and out the corner of her eye she saw someone burst through the front door. The man, whose identity she couldn’t even guess at, though she was certain the figure was male, barely avoided falling over her and Laura as his momentum carried him almost to the foot of the stairs. He recovered quickly and jumped over them both to run up the stairs.

From her position on the floor, which she couldn’t change without so much pain it was almost unbearable, Kirsty had very little idea of what was going on. All she could do was strain her ears, and fight against unconsciousness, which was a losing battle, to listen to the struggle on the stairs above her.

The struggle didn’t last long, as least not as far as she could tell, her sense of time was far from uncertain. After a few moments, she heard someone tumble down the stairs; she had no idea if it was Patrick, or the man who had burst through the front door, but they landed heavily on top of her. That was the last she knew as an unidentified body part collided with her head.



Kirsty woke to darkness, with no idea where she was. All she could tell, from the little she could make out through the darkness, was that she wasn’t at home. She tried, briefly, to push herself up into a sitting position so she could look around better and figure out her location; she quickly decided that moving was not a good idea, however. The attempt only increased the pain, which was radiating through her body from three distinct locations, to an almost unbearable level, and led to her discovering that her left arm was encased in plaster and secured to the side of the bed.

“Good morning, Miss Newsome,” a voice said from somewhere above her as Kirsty tentatively opened her eyes, some hours after she first woke, and saw a strange woman standing over her. “How are you feeling?”

“Like crap,” Kirsty managed to reply. “Where am I?”

“Thank God she’s awake.” Another voice spoke up from the other side of the room. “That snoring was driving me round the bend.”

“Laura,” Kirsty said the name in surprise, smiling automatically at her friend’s comment. “Where are we?”

“Where do you think we are, dummy?” Laura wanted to know. “We’re in hospital, just where you’d expect to be after surviving a knife attack. Unless you think we’re both dead and this is Heaven, in which I case I really have to question your choice of nurse. I know if it was me, I’d have picked someone a bit hotter to look after me.”

Kirsty was used to the way her friend spoke, and so didn’t let her comment bother her. “So what happened? The last thing I remember is someone landing on me.”

“I know about as much as you. I answered the door and found Patrick there. I never expected to see him on our doorstep after he and Julia broke up. When I asked him what he was doing there he pulled out a knife. He stabbed me and then shoved me back into the house so he could close the door.

“The police didn’t say anything when they told us Julia and Ben had been murdered, but I heard on the news they were both stabbed repeatedly…”

“We were hoping that wouldn’t be reported.” The comment, coming so unexpectedly, made both girls turn quickly to see the speaker in the doorway; despite the pain it cost them to do so. “But you can always rely on the media to report the lurid details of any crime.

“Good morning, ladies. I’m Detective Sergeant Fuller.” The middle-aged man in the much-wrinkled suit introduced himself as he moved further into the room. “I apologise for interrupting, you were telling your friend what you know of last night’s events, please, continue.” He helped himself to a seat from the side of the room, which he positioned squarely between the two beds.

A little nonplussed by the detective’s arrival, and the break in her train of thought, it took Laura a few moments to get back to what she had been saying. “The news said both Julia and Ben were stabbed repeatedly,” she continued finally, “and I thought for sure he was going to do the same to me. I just lay there on the floor, hoping he’d kill me quickly or go away, and I’m not sure which I was hoping for the most. I’ve never felt pain like I did then, I could barely think, but I remember being relieved when you called out, asking who was at the door, and he forgot about me to go after you. I’m sorry, Kirsty.” She felt terrible over the relief she had felt when Patrick left her to chase her friend. “I wanted to call out and warn you, I started to, but I was scared. I thought if I called out, he’d realise I wasn’t dead and he’d stab me again.” Tears rolled down her cheeks.

“It’s okay,” Kirsty forgave her friend, had she been able, she would have gone to her friend. Just the thought of moving ramped up the pain she was feeling, however. “I’d probably have been the same if it was me. I wouldn’t have wanted him to know I was still alive either.

“I guess I know what happened after that,” she said after a few moments, when they had themselves under control. “I ran back to my room and called the police, and when Patrick broke through the door I threw tennis balls at him. After that I ran back out of the room and tried to get away. He caught me at the top of the stairs and stabbed me.

“Everything’s a bit fuzzy from then on. Was it the police who broke in and fought with Patrick on the stairs? I know someone burst through the front door and fought with Patrick, and one of them fell and landed on my head. That’s the last thing I know.”

“No, it wasn’t a police officer who tackled your attacker,” Detective Sergeant Fuller answered Kirsty’s question, though it had been directed at her friend, not him. “It was your neighbour, Jason Greendale.”

“The old pervert who lives next door?” Laura queried.

“I think he might object to that description,” Fuller remarked, “since he is only twenty-eight, though he does live next door to you so that does make him your neighbour.”

“So he’s a young pervert, not an old one, he’s still a pervert. I’ve lived there for six months, and never once seen him outside. He’s always at the window, watching whenever one of us walks past though.”

“As I understand it, Mr Greendale has a rare skin condition that makes it painful for him to be out in sunlight, consequently he spends most of his time indoors. As for his always being at the window when one of you goes past, according to his statement, he works from home as a software developer. You’ve probably seen him working at his desk.”

“So he rescued us?” Kirsty asked, ignoring the disbelief on her friend’s face. “How did he know we needed rescuing?”

Fuller answered the question by taking a tennis ball from his pocket and tossing it onto Kirsty’s bed. “That smashed through Mr Greendale’s conservatory. When he investigated the sound of breaking glass he found that tennis ball and saw your broken bedroom window. Since he had already rescued you the other night, and had heard about the murder of your housemate on the news, he realised you were in trouble again, and this time your attacker was in the house. He raced round to your house and kicked in the door in time to find Patrick O’Herlihy descending the stairs, bloody knife in hand.”

“He’s the one who rescued me the other night?”

“He admitted as much when we took his statement during the night.”

“Then why did he disappear after he chased off Patrick? I assume it was Patrick who attacked me the other night.” A nod answered the question. “Did he kill Jules?” Another nod. “Oh God! Why? I know he wasn’t happy when Julia finished with him, but that was months ago.”

“Unhappy, he was pissed off,” Laura remained her friend. “He threw a glass at her in the pub and had to be dragged away by David.”

“If you ladies will permit me to continue, I’ll answer your questions shortly Miss Newsome. Mr Greendale entered your house in time to see Mr O’Herlihy descending the stairs holding the knife he stabbed you both with.” Fuller took up his narrative again. “Jumping over you both, he raced up the stairs and tackled Mr O’Herlihy without hesitation. A very brave act, if you ask me. They fought for a short while, until Mr O’Herlihy fell down the stairs, landing on your, Miss Newsome. Despite receiving a rather nasty cut to his arm, Mr Greendale didn’t hesitate to chase after Mr O’Herlihy when he ran from the house. He caught up with him in the street, where they fought again.

“I’m afraid to say your car suffered during the fight, Miss Newsome. It now has a rather large dent in the passenger door. Mr Greendale hit Mr O’Herlihy against it until he was unconscious. I shouldn’t really condone such violence, but given the confession Mr O’Herlihy made when I spoke to him after he woke up, I can’t say I’m inclined to make an issue of it. And that brings me to your questions. I’ll start with the easiest, the reason Mr Greendale didn’t stick around the other night. Because of his skin condition, Mr Greendale has spent the greater portion of his life indoors, and generally away from anyone other than family and doctors, with the result that he has never learned how to deal with people. He’s uncomfortable with strangers, and when he heard you, Miss Cutler, looking after your friend when he returned from chasing off Mr O’Herlihy, he decided there was no need for him to stick around, so he returned to his own home out of the way.”

Kirsty found it hard to imagine being uncomfortable around people, meeting and getting along with people, even strangers, was second nature to her.

“Why did Patrick kill Jules?” Laura asked, she was far more interested in knowing the answer to that question than in understanding her mysterious neighbour.

“Because he’s a nut-job.” Fuller gave a succinct answer, which explained nothing.

Laura looked at the detective as though he was a nut-job for a moment. “Is that an official description?” she couldn’t help asking.

“Well it certainly isn’t a medical one, but it should be, based on the conversation I had with him during the night,” he remarked. “When he woke up, which, fortunately, was before midnight, he was quite eager to tell me why he killed your friend Julia. In his words, she was a lying, cheating, whore, who got what she deserved.” Fully paused for a moment. “I apologise, but, as I said, those were his words. When I was able to get him to clarify, Mr O’Herlihy revealed that he recently discovered Miss Lincoln cheated on him while the two of them were involved.”

“That’s hardly news. Jules is, was, a lovely girl, my best friend, but she couldn’t stay faithful to save her life,” Laura remarked. “We all knew it, Kirsty,” she said, responding to the look her friend threw her. “Patrick was the only one who didn’t, and I don’t know how he did, she wasn’t exactly discreet.”

“Miss Lincoln’s lack of discretion aside, Mr O’Herlihy only recently found out about her infidelities when his brother let slip that he had slept with her. Upon hearing that his brother had slept with his girlfriend, Mr O’Herlihy lost the plot and attacked him. We found the body of David O’Herlihy in his flat in the early hours of this morning, as his brother told us we would. He had been dead for several days.”

Kirsty was so shocked that almost ten seconds passed before she was able to speak. “So, Patrick murdered Jules and his brother because they cheated on him together? That’s crazy.”

“You’ll get no argument from me on that score, Miss,” Fuller commented as he shifted himself on the uncomfortable chair. “I’ve investigated several murders during my time as a detective, but these were the worst.”

“I take it Gary was murdered because he had the misfortune of being with Jules when Patrick came for her.”

“Regrettably, yes. If he had not been there, Mr Turner would still be alive.”

“Okay, so I get why Patrick killed his brother, and Jules, and even Gary, even if his reasons are crazy. But why did he attack me?” Kirsty wanted to know. “I had nothing to do with Jules cheating on him with David.”

“That was a case of mistaken identity as far as I could gather. At this point in his story, Mr O’Herlihy became less coherent, mumbling something about the right dress, but the wrong girl.”

“He must have been talking about the dress I was wearing the night he attacked me, Jules lent it to me, and if I remember right, Patrick bought it for her. He bought her lots of things, I suppose it would have been easy for him to mistake me for Jules in that dress, people do say we look alike, from the back.”

“Well that explains that.” Fuller seemed relieved to have that cleared up. “And it brings us all up to date. The two of you now know everything that happened, not to mention why it happened, and I have the answer to the one thing Mr O’Herlihy didn’t clear up for me.”

“What happens now?” Laura asked. “You said Patrick confessed, does that mean he’ll go straight to jail? Or will there still need to be a trial?”

“Given the nature of the murders he has committed, Mr O’Herlihy will be examined by a psychologist, who will make a determination as to whether he is fit to stand trial. I think it likely he will be found unfit and sent to an institution; most probably he’ll spend a significant portion of his life there. I’ll keep you both informed, as and when I know anything.

“Is there anything else I can help you with?”

Kirsty shook her head. “No, thank you, detective. I think we need to be alone for a bit.”

Detective Sergeant Fuller nodded his understanding and got to his feet, quietly closing the door behind him as he left.


British or American

I noticed something in my writing today that caught me by surprise, I used an Americanism. I couldn’t say why I suddenly noticed it, or why I used it (I’m British and would not consciously use an Americanism, just as I don’t use American spellings, no matter how much MS Word tries to get me to do so) but it froze me in place and I spent several seconds just staring at it.

The phrase in question was ‘hall closet’, which should, of course, have been ‘cupboard in the passage’.

I’ve fixed it now, but I’m left to wonder how many other phrases from the wrong side of the pond are lurking undiscovered in my writing. I can only assume that this has something to do with the number of American TV programs and films I have been watching.

Is this a problem unique to me, or is it something that other non US authors find themselves struggling with as a result of all the America cinema and television we have to contend with? I hope it’s a problems for others, just so I’m not unique.


Noticing this issue has raised a question in my mind, should I be sticking with the Briticisms I feel most comfortable with, being British and setting my books in Britain, or should I be adapting the language I use, including the spellings, to make it more understandable to Americans, who are, after all the bigger market?

My natural instinct is to say no way in hell, GTFO Americans, learn proper English, but is that the attitude I should have? Should I not consider that if I want to be successful as an author I am probably going to have to make accomodations of one kind or another; did not Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone become Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone for the American market – I suspect this was a decision made by the publishing company, but they do know the market better than the author, usually anyway.

Thoughts on a postcard please, or the comments section down below. Should I color my words to reflect that America is the center of my hopes for publishing success, or keep with British English and colour as the Queen commands?

An apology


Some of you may have noticed that I’ve been a little lax in posting the last week or so, compared to previously, and I’m here to apologise. I’ve been struggling with my various mental health issues recently and that’s made it difficult to find either the energy or the enthusiasm to provide regular posts while keeping up with my writing and editing.

It’s gotten to the point where I’m cringing at every loud noise from the TV and it’s taken me all day to recover from a trip to the shops this morning where I nearly had a panic attack and was left almost in tears for most of the afternoon.

To make up for this lack, I’ve decided to give you all a preview of my new book, Written In Blood, it’s been quite a while since I did so, I hope you like it.


Emily was on her bed, reading a book, one eye on the clock on her bedside cabinet so she wouldn’t be late putting the potatoes on, when she heard the vehicle pull into the yard outside. Pushing herself up, she craned her head round to look out the window to see who it was; it was too early for it to be her dad or her brother, they were unlikely to get home until just before dinner was ready to be served.

The moment she saw the Land Rover in the yard she leaped to her feet, pleased that Zack Wild had returned. As pleased as she was, she was also more than a little nervous. She knew she had caught Zack by surprise earlier, she had caught herself by surprise as well, to such an extent that she had forgotten to grab her bag when she got out of his car; she had now had enough time to think about what she had done and realise what a fool she had made of herself.

On her way out of the bedroom and down the stairs, Emily imagined the possible reasons for his return: he could be there to return her bag, or he could be there to make sure she was not going to tell anyone what had happened between them; he might even be there because he had changed his mind about what he had said earlier.

She hesitated with her hand on the front door catch, a little reluctant to open the door and discover how her next encounter with Zack Wild was going to go. After almost half a minute had passed, she took a deep breath, summoned her courage, and opened the door so she could step out into the yard.

Zack was nowhere to be seen. Emily had thought to find him outside the front door, about to ring the bell, but he wasn’t there. She looked around the yard, but couldn’t see him, which made no sense to her; she couldn’t think where he might have gone. She walked to each corner of the house to see if he had gone round one of the sides for some reason, but there was no sign of him. Bewildered, she walked to where the Land Rover had been parked in the middle of the yard.

She wasn’t normally the sort of person to go rummaging around in someone’s car without permission, it wasn’t polite, but on this occasion she thought herself justified in doing so since she was after her bag. Her bag wasn’t where she had left it, though. It should have been in the foot-well in front of the passenger seat, but it wasn’t there. Not sure why the bag wasn’t there, she leaned further into the vehicle so she could search under the passenger seat, where she found a number of items, none of which were her bag.

The desire to find out more about the man who lived down the road, and with whom she had made such a fool of herself, made her take out each item in turn so she could examine it. She discovered little, other than that Zack Wild was messier than she had previously thought, at least initially; the first few items she pulled out were a road map of the county, an empty crisp packet, a couple of chocolate wrappers, and a hammer – she had no idea why he had a hammer under the passenger seat, it seemed a strange thing for him to have there, but it wasn’t as strange as the next thing she pulled out, a pink mobile phone.

For several long moments, Emily simply stared at the phone in her hand; the phone was familiar to her, she was sure she had seen it before, but she knew it wasn’t Zack’s. She couldn’t work out where it was she knew the phone from, and that annoyed her because she was sure it was important; it came back to her in a flash, whose phone it was and where she had seen it before, when the voice sounded from behind her.

“What are you doing?” The voice that uttered the question was curious, but evidenced no concern, not until she turned round and its owner saw the phone in her hand. “Where did you get that? Give it to me,” he demanded, holding out a hand insistently.

In an instant Emily knew who had killed Georgina Ryder, and Lucy Goulding, and it was the last person she would have thought of. So great was her shock that she was left frozen to the spot, unable to react to her discovery except by standing there and staring at him in slack-jawed shock. Only when he lunged at her, demanding, “Give me that phone, you nosey bitch,” did she recover the ability to move.

At the last second, right before his grasping hand closed around her wrist, Emily twisted away. She felt a small amount of satisfaction when his momentum carried him into the side of the Land Rover, which he collided with heavily, but didn’t allow that to stop her racing across the yard to the still open front door. Once she was through the door, she slammed it closed and, with fumbling fingers, dropped the catch; she didn’t suppose that was going to keep him outside for long, but any delay was good.

When the front door, against which she was leaning, shook under the impact of something heavy, Emily left it and hurried up the stairs. Her fingers continued to show little willingness to properly obey the commands they were being given by her brain as she sought to unlock Georgina Ryder’s phone – she had seen it previously in the hands of her brother’s girlfriend, which was why she had found it familiar from the moment she picked it up – and call her father. She was beginning to think the phone was dead, after all it was more than a week since it must have been lost, when the screen lit up; unfortunately, that was as far as she got for Georgina had her phone secured with a password.

She was struck by a moment of inspiration as she closed the door to her bedroom with a bang and twisted the key in the old-fashioned lock.

The relief she felt when Georgina’s birthday unlocked the phone was amazing, she had never felt anything so powerfully before. That relief quickly disappeared, however, when she got no answer from her father’s number. Again and again she tried to get hold of her father, while she listened with one ear to the front door being smashed open, followed by the thunder of footsteps on their way up the stairs.

“Come on, dad,” Emily pleaded to the phone she had pressed to her ear so hard it was liable to stay there even after she let go of it. “Pickup, pickup, pickup. Where are you when I need you?” When the thunderous footsteps reached the top of the stairs and stopped, only to be followed by a crash as something heavy slammed into the door of the bedroom, Emily abandoned her efforts to contact her father and instead dialled the number for Oakhurst’s police station. She hoped, while dialling, that the solid, and old, oak door that she had always hated would prove to be strong enough to keep out Georgina and Lucy’s killer; so far it had stood up to the job – it shook and shuddered within its frame, but remained secure.

More than she feared being murdered, if it was possible for her to fear something more than that, she feared what he might do to her before he killed her. As she had told Zack on the drive back to the village, she knew what Sergeant Mitchell believed had been done to Georgina and Lucy before they were killed. Until about five minutes ago, she wouldn’t have believed that someone she knew so well could be capable of either rape or murder, and she certainly wouldn’t have believed Him capable of doing committing either act on her; having seen His face when he tried to get the phone from her, though, she found herself scared that he was prepared to do anything, to anyone, including her.

Sturdy the door might be, sturdy enough it wasn’t. Once, twice, three times, He threw his body against the door, and on the fourth time it burst open in a shower of splinters that made Emily duck for fear of being struck. When she straightened up, she saw the menacing figure of the man she had cared about approaching her through the ruins of her door. His face was a twisted, barely recognisable, mask of rage that made her tremble so badly she could barely keep hold of the phone.

“Gimme the phone,” he demanded in a voice that was so harsh and full of so much hatred that  it combined with the look on his face to give him an air of insanity.

Emily could only wonder how it was that she had not seen before how crazy he was. It didn’t seem possible that he could have concealed what kind of person he was from her for so long; not only from her, but from everyone who knew him. Someone should have seen through the act he was putting on, she thought during the millisecond or so where she was able to think with some semblance of clarity.

“I said gimme the fucking phone.”

Emily twisted away as he lunged for her and the phone she was holding. She tried to slip past him and out of the room, thinking that she if she could get out of the house without getting caught, she stood a chance of making it to the village – once there she would be safe. The idea was good, but it failed at the first hurdle; she was caught before she could even get out of the room. She was almost at the door when she was brought short by a sharp jerk on her top, the back of which had been grabbed by the killer she was trying to elude.

“Where the hell d’you think you’re going?”

The question, which was all but shouted in Emily’s face, was accompanied by a yank that sent her spinning and stumbling across the room. She hit the bed and fell over it, landing heavily on the floor on the other side of it; unaware that her call to the police station had been answered, Emily lost her grip on the phone, it bounced from her hand and slid out of sight under the bed. Being far more concerned with protecting herself from the maniac who was obviously intent on causing her serious harm, and most likely on killing her, Emily struggled to her feet, at least she tried to, before she could make it further than her knees she was grabbed and thrown onto her back.

“What the hell were you doing looking around in my car?” he demanded, punching Emily in the face as she tried to sit up. “Why are you so fucking nosey? I said, why are you so fucking nosey?” Grabbing Emily by the front of her t-shirt, he pulled her up so he could punch her again, as a punishment for not answering him, not that she could have done so for the first blow had rocked her head back so that it struck the bedside cabinet behind her.

Again and again he repeated his question, voicing it in different ways, and again and again he hit Emily when she didn’t answer him. Finally, it sank in that he was not going to get an answer because Emily was incapable of providing one. Once he realised that, he let go of her t-shirt, leaving her to drop to the floor with a thud. While the thud echoed around the bedroom, the madness that had overcome him began to fade and sense, or some semblance of it, began to return to his mind, though not before he was struck by a last – for the time being – burst of open insanity.

“Look what you’ve made me do. Look at the mess you’ve made me make.” He kicked Emily in the stomach; he was tempted to kick her again, but forced himself to hold back. He couldn’t afford himself the luxury of wasting any more time; now that the madness was gone, and he was thinking a little more clearly, he realised that he had to move quickly if he wanted to avoid getting caught.

He had no idea how much time he had before Zara got home, and he had to get Emily’s body out of there before she did, before she could see what he had done. He didn’t know where he could take her – he certainly couldn’t dump her body where he had dumped Georgina and Lucy, that would be the first place the police would look, but having a destination wasn’t half as important as getting her out of the house.

He looked out of the window quickly, to be sure the yard was clear, then he bent to grab Emily by the front of her t-shirt. With a heave, He lifted her up from the floor; he had a good set of muscles, but it took all his strength to get the dead weight of her to his shoulder, even though she was not all that heavy, and he staggered a little as he made his way out of the room.

The above is still in the rewrite stage and hasn’t gone through editing, so I hope you will forgive any mistakes there might be.

Blurb experiments

I’ve been reading Navigating Indieworld by Julie A Gerber and Carole P Roman and it has inspired me to take a fresh look at the blurb I wrote for my debut novel, Where There’s A Will; I’d like you guys to have a read and see what you think.

Current blurb

An armed robbery, a kidnapping, and an enemy that’s closer than anyone realises.

Inspector Stone has to put aside problems at home and an ambitious underling when the daughter of a local businessman is kidnapped, and a multi-million Euro ransom demanded for her return.
Can he find her and return her safely to her parents when the kidnappers are dangerously close to home?

New version

Robbery, kidnapping, murder, some people will do anything to get rich.

A rich family, a big house, and everything her heart desires, Alice Keating has a life that many want, and now someone has decided to take it.

When the schoolgirl is kidnapped it falls to Detective Inspector Nathan Stone to find her and return her safely to her family. If that wasn’t a tough enough job, he’s already on another case, trying to catch the armed robbers who stole fifty thousand pounds at gunpoint and nearly killed an old man and his dog in the getaway.

The man behind Alice’s kidnapping it closer to home than anyone suspects though, and he’s not above murder to stay out of jail and get what he wants.